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'''Deluxe Retaining Soil''' is a [[Fertilizer]] that keeps soil watered. It can be [[Crafting|crafted]] after purchasing the recipe from the [[Island Trader]] for 50 [[Cinder Shard]]s. 5-7 Deluxe Retaining Soil may occasionally be found in [[Supply Crate]]s on the [[Farm Maps#Beach|Beach Farm]] provided the player has upgraded the [[Farmhouse]] at least two times.
 
'''Deluxe Retaining Soil''' is a [[Fertilizer]] that keeps soil watered. It can be [[Crafting|crafted]] after purchasing the recipe from the [[Island Trader]] for 50 [[Cinder Shard]]s. 5-7 Deluxe Retaining Soil may occasionally be found in [[Supply Crate]]s on the [[Farm Maps#Beach|Beach Farm]] provided the player has upgraded the [[Farmhouse]] at least two times.
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Deluxe Retaining Soil can be placed on tilled soil ''before or after'' planting a seed, or at any stage of crop growth. If the soil is not already watered, it has no water to retain and plants will not grow until watered once. The chance for retaining water is 100%, which means after watering once the soil will be guaranteed to be watered up until the crop is ready to be harvested. This makes it especially useful in situations where [[Sprinkler]]s are unavailable, such as in [[Garden Pot]]s or in most areas on the [[Farm Maps#Map Types|Beach Farm]].
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Deluxe Retaining Soil can be placed on tilled soil ''before or after'' planting a seed, or at any stage of crop growth. If the soil is not already watered, the fertilizer has no water to retain and plants will not grow until watered once. The chance for retaining water is 100%, which means after watering once the soil will be guaranteed to be watered up until the crop is ready to be harvested. This makes it especially useful in situations where [[Sprinkler]]s are unavailable, such as in [[Garden Pot]]s or in most areas on the [[Farm Maps#Map Types|Beach Farm]].
    
If a crop that yields multiple produce from one planting is fertilized with Deluxe Retaining Soil, water retention continues through all repeating harvests. In the Greenhouse, on Ginger Island Farm, or in Garden Pots in buildings, where seasonal changes do not affect a planting's lifetime, the fertilizer continues until the plant is removed from the tile.
 
If a crop that yields multiple produce from one planting is fertilized with Deluxe Retaining Soil, water retention continues through all repeating harvests. In the Greenhouse, on Ginger Island Farm, or in Garden Pots in buildings, where seasonal changes do not affect a planting's lifetime, the fertilizer continues until the plant is removed from the tile.
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