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  |hearts  = 2
 
  |hearts  = 2
 
  |trigger = Enter [[1 River Road|George's house]] house when [[George]] is there.
 
  |trigger = Enter [[1 River Road|George's house]] house when [[George]] is there.
  |details = Harvey is performing a private check-up on George. He tries to explain to George that he needs to make some lifestyle changes if he wants to keep healthy, but George seems irritated with his advice and states that he knows what's best for his own body. Harvey explains that he went to school for 8 years so that he could help people in an attempt to get George to cooperate, but then his attention is drawn away as he notices your character has entered the house. Harvey tells your character they shouldn't be there because it is a private session, but George stops them from leaving by asking your character for a second opinion on the matter.  
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  |details = Harvey is performing a private check-up on George. He tries to explain that George needs to make some lifestyle changes if he wants to keep healthy, but George seems irritated with his advice and states that he knows what's best for his own body. Harvey explains that he went to school for eight years so that he could help people in an attempt to get George to cooperate, but then his attention is drawn away as he notices your arrival. Harvey says you shouldn't be there because it is a private session, but George stops you from leaving by asking for a second opinion on the matter.  
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* "George should follow Dr. Harvey's advice."
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* "George should follow Dr. Harvey's advice." +40 friendship points with Harvey. He again says that he's only trying to help and George finally gives in and agrees to following doctor's orders. After that Harvey thanks you for the help and say that he appreciates you.
*: +40 friendship points with Harvey. He again says that he's only trying to help and George finally gives in and agrees to following doctor's orders. After that Harvey will thank the player for helping him and say that he appreciates them.
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* "George knows what's best for his own body." -40 friendship points with Harvey. He sighs and tells George that if he's going to behave like this, Harvey will have to tell George's wife and she won't be happy. George begrudgingly concedes to the doctor's orders. Harvey tells you that it's better not to give patients mixed messages.
* "George knows what's best for his own body."
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*: -40 friendship points with Harvey. He sighs and tells George that if he is going to behave like this, Harvey will have to tell George's wife and she will not be happy. George begrudgingly concedes to the doctor's orders. Harvey tells the player that it is better not to give his patients mixed messages.
      
[[File:Harvey Two Heart Event.jpg|700px]]
 
[[File:Harvey Two Heart Event.jpg|700px]]
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  |hearts  = 4
 
  |hearts  = 4
 
  |trigger = Enter the [[clinic]] when Harvey is there.
 
  |trigger = Enter the [[clinic]] when Harvey is there.
  |details = Harvey will tell your character he was just about to write them a letter about how they're overdue for their annual check-up. As he's looking them over he notices their pulse seems high.
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  |details = Harvey says he was just about to write you a letter about how you're overdue for your annual check-up. As he's looking you over, he notices your pulse seems high.
* "I'm a little nervous..." +20 friendship points. Harvey will assume that it's because of the Hospital and tell you to relax because he's here to help.
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* "I'm a little nervous..." +20 friendship points. Harvey assumes that it's because of the Hospital and tell you to relax because he's here to help.
 
* "I'm out of breath from working on the farm." +20 friendship points.
 
* "I'm out of breath from working on the farm." +20 friendship points.
 
* "Are you really a doctor? My pulse is fine!" -50 friendship points.
 
* "Are you really a doctor? My pulse is fine!" -50 friendship points.
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At the end of it Harvey will state that your character is healthy and should take care not to overwork themselves on the farm.
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At the end of it Harvey declares you healthy and says you should take care not to overwork yourself on the farm.
    
[[File:Harvey Four Heart Event.jpg|700px]]
 
[[File:Harvey Four Heart Event.jpg|700px]]
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  |hearts  = 6
 
  |hearts  = 6
 
  |trigger = Enter the [[Pierre's General Store|general store]] between 11am and 3pm.
 
  |trigger = Enter the [[Pierre's General Store|general store]] between 11am and 3pm.
  |details = You will witness a dance aerobics session with some of the ladies and someone unexpected, Harvey. Harvey seems out of breath as the session comes to an end, heading towards the door to leave but running into your character on the way. Harvey seems to be incredibly embarrassed when he finds out your character was watching, wanting to keep it a secret from everyone. He explains that he's doing it to stay healthy, which becomes more difficult with age and the stress of running the clinic essentially alone. Harvey seems discouraged because of how difficult it is for him to keep up with the rest of the group, figuring he must not be in good shape. He will ask your character not to tell the rest of the town that he's doing dance aerobics, and if the player chooses not to tell, Harvey will thank your character and say that he appreciates them.
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  |details = You witness a dance aerobics session with some of the ladies and, unexpectedly, Harvey. Harvey seems out of breath as the session comes to an end, heading towards the door to leave but running into you on the way. Harvey seems incredibly embarrassed when he finds out you was watching, wanting to keep it a secret. He explains that he's doing it to stay healthy, which becomes more difficult with age and the stress of running the clinic essentially alone. Harvey seems discouraged because of how difficult it is for him to keep up with the rest of the group, figuring he must not be in good shape. He asks you not to tell the rest of the town that he's doing dance aerobics. If you choose not to tell, Harvey thanks you and say that he appreciates you.
    
[[File:Harvey Six Heart Event 1.jpg|700px]]
 
[[File:Harvey Six Heart Event 1.jpg|700px]]
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  |hearts  = 8
 
  |hearts  = 8
 
  |trigger = Walk into the [[clinic]].
 
  |trigger = Walk into the [[clinic]].
  |details = Your character will head into Harvey's room to find him using his equipment in an attempt to contact a pilot. He will suddenly get a response, surprising him and making his pulse race, but he manages to respond with his coordinates. He'll then notice your character is there and tell them about how he made contact with a real pilot. He'll excitedly tell your character to come over to the window to watch the pilot fly overhead with him. After the plane passes over Harvey will open up about how he always wanted to be a pilot when he was younger, but couldn't because of his bad eyesight and crippling fear of heights. He tells your character not to be sad about it, that he's accepted not everyone can achieve their dreams and that is just the way the world is. Harvey will try to then lighten the mood by asking your character to look at his model planes, having just finished the TR-Starbird deluxe set.
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  |details = You head into Harvey's room to find him using his equipment in an attempt to contact a pilot. He suddenly gets a response, surprising him and making his pulse race, but he manages to respond with his coordinates. He notices you and tells you he made contact with a real pilot. He excitedly tells you to come over to the window to watch the pilot fly overhead with him. After the plane passes Harvey opens up about how he always wanted to be a pilot when he was younger, but couldn't because of his bad eyesight and crippling fear of heights. He tells you not to be sad about it, that he's accepted not everyone can achieve their dreams and that is just the way the world is. Harvey tries to lighten the mood by asking you to look at his model planes, having just finished the TR-Starbird deluxe set.
    
[[File:Harvey Eight Heart Event 1.jpg|700px]]
 
[[File:Harvey Eight Heart Event 1.jpg|700px]]
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{{heart event
 
{{heart event
 
  |hearts  = 10
 
  |hearts  = 10
  |trigger = Harvey sends the player a letter asking to meet at the [[railroad|railroad tracks]]. Go there between 9am and 5pm.
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  |trigger = Harvey sends you a letter asking to meet at the [[railroad|railroad tracks]]. Go there between 9am and 5pm.
  |details = Meeting him there, he remarks that he's glad they came and that something should be happening very soon. A man in a hot air balloon descends and lands nearby, saying that the balloon is yours to commandeer for the next two hours before heading towards town to go to the [[Stardrop Saloon]]. Harvey tells your character that he saw the hot air balloon rental advertised in the newspaper and thought it was a perfect thing to do together. Before hopping in, the player can either immediately get to it or ask him why he did this, since you know about his incredible fear of heights. In opting to ask, he bashfully explains that while his fear is still a major factor, he admires your character and their courage and says that it should be more than enough for the both of you.  
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  |details = When you meet him there, he says he's glad you came and that something should be happening very soon. A man in a hot air balloon lands nearby, says the balloon is yours for the next two hours, and heads into town for the [[Stardrop Saloon]]. Harvey tells you that he saw the hot air balloon rental advertised in the newspaper and thought it was a perfect thing to do together. Before hopping in, you can either immediately get to it or ask him why he did this, since you know about his incredible fear of heights. If you opt to ask him, he bashfully explains that while his fear is still a major factor, he admires you and your courage and says that it should be more than enough for the both of you.  
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Boarding the hot air balloon, Harvey switches on the burner below to make the it ascend but soon freaks out once he realizes how fast it's rising. High in the sky his mood oscillates between fear and elation, eventually coming to his senses and remembering that your character is there with him. He marvels at how much he can see below and glad that he's doing this together with your character. Soon before the two hour rental is up, him and your character draw close into a kiss. You return the balloon to the rental man at least a half hour late.
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Boarding the hot air balloon, Harvey switches on the burner below to make it ascend but freaks out once he realizes how fast it's rising. High in the sky his mood oscillates between fear and elation, eventually coming to his senses and remembering that you're there with him. He marvels at how much he can see below and is glad that he's doing this with you. Soon before the two-hour rental is up, you draw close into a kiss. You return the balloon to the rental man at least a half hour late.
    
[[File:Harvey Ten Heart Event 1.jpg|700px]]
 
[[File:Harvey Ten Heart Event 1.jpg|700px]]
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