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2) In my view, the first paragraph is just one sentence, telling about what the primary impacts of books are. The second paragraph ought to be just more general or background material: second paragraph for secondary material. Therefore, "Books can be obtained in a variety of ways." ought to begin the second paragraph, joined with gifting, a secondary purpose. Then if someone reads only the first paragraph, they get the meat. The rest is less informative, hence separated. [[User:Giles|Giles]] ([[User talk:Giles|talk]]) 18:55, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
 
2) In my view, the first paragraph is just one sentence, telling about what the primary impacts of books are. The second paragraph ought to be just more general or background material: second paragraph for secondary material. Therefore, "Books can be obtained in a variety of ways." ought to begin the second paragraph, joined with gifting, a secondary purpose. Then if someone reads only the first paragraph, they get the meat. The rest is less informative, hence separated. [[User:Giles|Giles]] ([[User talk:Giles|talk]]) 18:55, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
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:Only 1 book gives cooking recipes, get rid of it and make the paragraph more generic. [[User:Margotbean|margotbean]] ([[User talk:Margotbean|talk]]) 18:59, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
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