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: I intend to proceed from the current state of the article, rather than going back to the specific edit discussed here, but I may reverse some language which was introduced in this edit. I invite discussion on any points I made here, or in future edits. Different ways of looking at the language are the essence of making language say what's needed to the most people. Thanks. [[User:Giles|Giles]] ([[User talk:Giles|talk]]) 03:03, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
 
: I intend to proceed from the current state of the article, rather than going back to the specific edit discussed here, but I may reverse some language which was introduced in this edit. I invite discussion on any points I made here, or in future edits. Different ways of looking at the language are the essence of making language say what's needed to the most people. Thanks. [[User:Giles|Giles]] ([[User talk:Giles|talk]]) 03:03, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
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::The edit in the first two paragraphs removed "In some cases, a second reading gives additional or increased advantages." not because it's incorrect but because it's something that can be introduced later, as the edit did.
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::No, it said "Each of the 19 power books '''gives the player a power the first time they are read.'''" Nothing misleading was introduced. If you think there's a better way to word that, then change it.
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::That's something that's incomplete and should be clarified more with further testing. Also, it does say now that some of them give 20 XP in all skills, so hopefully the confusion of books like Friendship 101 are now clarified.
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::[[Skills]] is much easier for new editors to understand than [[Skills|skills]] and also, links like the former load faster.
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::No, I removed the false claim that "re-reading skill books give 100 XP", because they do not give just that, they still give 250 XP like with the first reading. The edit corrected that misleading claim and said "Reading each of the other 5 skill books grants the player 250 experience points in the specific associated skill, or if the player has already unlocked access to the Mastery Cave, then 250 Mastery points." It never said anywhere that the benefit of earning 250 XP only happens the first time the player reads the book. [[User:User314159|User314159]] ([[User talk:User314159|talk]]) 03:44, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
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