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- 05:10, 17 January 2019 diff hist -1 m Linus →Relationships: Removed comma, ameliorating comma w/dependent clause error. "Robin mentions...bother them."
- 05:09, 17 January 2019 diff hist -1 m Linus →Relationships: Removed two commas. (No comma w/dependent clauses.) Changed "as" to "due" for greater sentence flow. Externalized parenthetical aside. (Offset phrases within sentences are grammatically inappropriate when phrase includes a period.)
- 02:10, 15 January 2019 diff hist +26 m Coffee Bean →Trivia: Removed parentheses surrounding "the first day...merchant[,]" added "which is" and removed redundant comma. Capitalized "Summer," "Year" and "One" where appropriate. Changed parentheses to brackets in equation and "x" to "×" for clarity.