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{{heart event
 
  |hearts  = 2
 
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  |trigger = Walk into the [[Carpenter's Shop]] when Maru is there.
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  |trigger = Enter the [[Carpenter's Shop]] when Maru is there.
  |details = As you walk into their house, you find Maru and Demetrius in their lab. Maru asks you to watch a beaker as she has to go do something. While you're watching the beaker, Demetrius starts talking to you about his special little girl Maru. Demetrius states that he doesn't want anything getting in the way of Maru's future "If you know what I mean." When Maru returns, Demetrius tells Maru that he was telling you about the tests.
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  |details = You find Maru and Demetrius testing soil samples in their lab. Maru asks you to watch a beaker while she fetches more samples. When she leaves, Demetrius tells you that Maru is a good kid and his 'special little girl', and he wouldn't want anything getting in the way of her bright future. When Maru returns, Demetrius says you've been talking about the soil samples.
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* "(Say nothing)" +10 friendship points. Both Demetrius and Maru go back to their work.
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* '''(Say nothing)''' +10 friendship points. Demetrius and Maru go back to work.
* "Actually, your dad was being weird." -100 friendship points. Maru will ask Demetrius what the player is talking about. Demetrius will tell the truth and apologize for his behaviour.
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* '''"Actually, your dad was being weird."''' -100 friendship points. Maru asks Demetrius what you're talking about. Demetrius tells the truth and apologizes for his behaviour.
 
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{{heart event
 
{{heart event
 
  |hearts  = 4
 
  |hearts  = 4
  |trigger = Triggered by entering the clinic on a Tuesday or Thursday while Maru is working there.
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  |trigger = Enter the [[clinic]] on Tuesday or Thursday when Maru is working there.
  |details = She is surprised by your entry and drops a glass beaker she is holding. Worried about Harvey's response, she asks you what she should do. The three responses below are paraphrases.
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  |details = Maru is startled by your entry and drops a glass beaker she's holding. Worried about Harvey's response, she asks what she should do.
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::• "Just scoop it off the floor. He won't know the difference." -50 friendship points. She will argue that of course Harvey will be able to tell the difference. Harvey comes in after hearing the breaking glass, and Maru tells him it was an accident. He is thankful for her telling the truth, since she is a big help around the clinic. It ends with Harvey asking if the player is ok, since they're looking a little pale.
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* '''"Just scoop it off the floor. He won't know the difference."''' -50 friendship points. She says that of course Harvey will be able to tell the difference. When Harvey comes to investigate the noise, Maru tells him it was an accident and apologises.
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* '''"Tell Harvey it was my fault."''' -20 friendship points. When Harvey comes to investigate the noise, she tells Harvey that it was your fault.
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* '''"Tell Harvey it was an accident."''' +50 friendship points. When Harvey comes in to investigate the noise, she tells him it was an accident and apologises.
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::• "Tell Harvey it was [player's] fault." -20 friendship points. She agrees and tells Harvey once he comes in from hearing glass break he is disappointed she blamed someone else and it ends Harvey saying it'll put them back in red for a month.
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If Maru blames you, Harvey is disappointed that she didn't take responsibility for her own actions and says the mistake will put them back in the red for a month. Maru is flustered and upset.
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::• "Tell Harvey it was an accident." +50 friendship points. She agrees and tells Harvey once he comes in from hearing glass break he is thankful for her telling the truth since she is a big help around the clinic, in the end Harvey asks if the player is ok, since they're looking a bit pale.
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If Maru says it was an accident and apologises, Harvey thanks her for telling the truth and tells her not to worry about it. Maru thanks him for his patience, and Harvey says she's been a big help and he doesn't know what he'd do without her. You emote a sweat drop; he turns to you and asks if you're okay, since you're looking a bit pale.
 
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:When Maru tells Harvey the truth, he easily forgives her and praises her for being such a good help around the clinic. Maru is happy that she was honest, but the player character has a tear above their head at the end of the event (unclear whether from sadness or relief).
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:When Maru blames the incident on you, Harvey scolds her saying that she shouldn't blame her problems on others. This leaves Maru feeling flustered and upset.
   
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{{heart event
 
{{heart event
 
  |hearts  = 6
 
  |hearts  = 6
  |trigger = Triggered by entering the area of the map where her house is located in the evening (Appears to be around 9PM - 11:40PM on a sunny day).
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  |trigger = Enter the [[mountain]] in the evening (seems to be around 9pm to 11:40pm on a sunny day).
  |details = Maru is looking through the telescope and is surprised to see you walking past. She offers you to look through the telescope and asks what you see. You have the option to say :
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  |details = You see Maru looking through her telescope. She's surprised to see you out so late, and says she wants to show you something. You look through her telescope and she asks what you see.
::• "A beautiful planet" +30 friendship points.
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* '''"A beautiful planet."''' +30 friendship points. Maru responds, "It's amazing, isn't it?"
::• "A cold, dark abyss" -30 friendship points
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* '''"A cold, dark abyss."''' -30 friendship points. Maru responds, "I guess you could see it like that... But it's still grand, isn't it?"
:She mentions that she has something to tell you but thinks about it and changes her mind and decides to show you a binary star system instead. Your character feels as if Maru showed you something special.
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Maru says that by the time any of these stars are visited, you'll both be long gone. "I guess that's the trouble with being human, huh?" She begins to tell you something, then changes her mind and shows you a binary star system instead. The cutscene ends as your character thinks, "What a beautiful night! Maru showed me something new..."
 
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{{heart event
 
{{heart event
 
  |hearts  = 8
 
  |hearts  = 8
  |trigger = Triggered by entering [[Carpenter's Shop]], when she is not at work.
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  |trigger = Enter the [[Carpenter's Shop]] when she's not at work.
  |details = Maru will show you what it is she's been working on, and accidentally shock you in the process of testing it. The player falls to the floor and Maru quickly gets burn cream. She apologizes, and you have the choice of two responses which will affect her affection for you.
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  |details = Maru says she's been working on a new project, something big. She shows you a machine and says it's just one component. She asks you to put your hand on it for a demonstration, flips a switch, and you get electrocuted. Maru is aghast and asks if you're alright. She applies burn cream and apologises.
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::• "It's okay, it doesn't even hurt." +30 friendship points.
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* '''"It's okay, it doesn't even hurt."''' +30 friendship points.
::• "You'd better be. This hurts like crazy!" -50 friendship points.
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* '''"You'd better be. This hurts like crazy!"''' -50 friendship points.
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She says that kind of ruined the moment, and sighs.
 
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{{heart event
 
  |hearts  = 10
 
  |hearts  = 10
  |trigger = [[Carpenter's Shop]] 9AM - 4PM, any weather. Triggered by entering her house.
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  |trigger = Enter the [[Carpenter's Shop]] between 9am and 4pm.
  |details = She says that her project is finished. Now she takes you into her workshop (trapdoor) to show you a robot she built to help her parents.
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  |details = Maru says her big project is finally done. She takes you into her private workshop to show you a robot she built to help her parents. She calls it MarILDA, short for ''Maru's Interactive Laboratory Device Alpha''. She tells you she's been working on it for months, and has been waiting for you to come by before activating MarILDA. She activates the robot, who says "Greetings, Maru. No need to respond... I have already predicted what you will say."
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Demetrius comes in to see what you two are up to. He sees the robot and becomes frightened. Maru tells him not to be scared and that MarILDA is her latest invention. The robot greets him, but Demetrius is upset. "This is why you've locked yourself in your room the last few months? ...and I thought you were down here fooling around with <your name>..." Maru says she's been making this robot to help Demetrius and Robin when she's not living with them anymore.
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MarILDA interrupts: "Excuse me... I am sorry, Maru. But I do not want to be your servant... In the time since you activated me, I have been pondering the nature of my existence with the 'self-awareness' module you installed in my neural cortex. I am sorry to disappoint you all, but I must ask for my freedom. I've decided to explore the galaxy in search of other synthetic life-forms."
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Maru is startled and asks her to wait, but Demetrius says it's OK to let MarILDA go free. "Your mother and I can take care of ourselves. I know you're ready to start a life of your own, and I've come to terms with the thought of not having you around anymore. Besides, this... creation of yours seems pretty advanced. It wouldn't feel right to keep her as a servant. <your name>, I'm sorry I mistrusted you. You're a <''good guy'' or ''fine young woman''>. I've never seen Maru so lively and creative... and I've never been more proud of her. If you've had a hand in that, then you have my gratitude." He leaves the room.
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Demetrius follows you and gets scared by the robot Maru activated. The robot wants his freedom so they let her go. Maru will ask you what you think which may affect her affection for you.
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Maru walks MarILDA outside. MarILDA thanks Maru for creating her and blasts off into space. Maru watches her go and asks what you think.
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::• "I'm so impressed with your inventions." +50 friendship points.
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* '''"I'm so impressed with your inventions."''' +50 friendship points. Maru responds: "Thanks. That means a lot to me, <your name>. I know gadgets aren't really your kind of thing... but I do appreciate that you're showing interest in what I do. I wish I could return the favor somehow."
::• "I'm disappointed... you should have made that robot your slave." -50 friendship points.
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* '''"I'm disappointed... you should have made that robot your slave."''' -50 friendship points. Maru responds: "What? After she said point-blank that she doesn't want to be a slave? How cold... You must have a good reason for saying that..."
:::• "MarILDA's just a piece of machinery designed to act human." +50 friendship points.
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** '''"MarILDA's just a piece of machinery designed to act human."''' +50 friendship points. Maru responds: "... You have a point, I did program her to act human... but her neural net is so complex, I can't be sure conciousness didn't emerge on its own. Furthermore, isn't it a little arrogant to assume that human-like consciousness is the only worthwhile vessel of existence? Computer brains are different than ours, but that doesn't mean we can disregard them." She thanks you for coming by and leaves.
:::• "I was just kidding. MarILDA deserves her freedom." +50 friendship points.
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** '''"I was just kidding. MarILDA deserves her freedom."''' +50 friendship points. Maru responds: "I see. Well it wasn't a very funny joke." She thanks you for coming by and leaves.
:::• "I would've put her to work on the farm." -50 friendship points.
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** '''"I would've put her to work on the farm."''' -50 friendship points. Maru responds: "That's horrible! What's gotten into you, <your name>? I'm just going to forget about this conversation... you aren't acting yourself." She thanks you for coming by and leaves.
::• "So is your Dad okay with 'us' now?" no change in friendship points.
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* '''"So is your Dad okay with 'us' now?"''' No change in friendship points. Maru responds: "Heh... Yeah I guess he did kinda say that, didn't he? ...Um..."
::• "(Just stare at Maru and say nothing)" no change in friendship points.
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* '''(Just stare at Maru and say nothing)''' no change in friendship points. Maru responds: "... ..."
 
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