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{{heart event
 
{{heart event
 
  |hearts  = 10
 
  |hearts  = 10
  |trigger = After you reach 10 hearts with Elliott, you will receive a letter in the mail from him, saying that he has an idea. Go to the beach on a sunny morning (before 12 PM?).
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  |trigger = After receiving a letter from Elliott, go to the beach on a sunny day between 7am and 1pm.
  |details = You will join Elliott on the docks. Elliott fixed the row boat that has been on the docks, and he was wondering if you wanted to go with him on a "maiden voyage". You can choose whether or not you want to get in the boat. If you do get in the boat, Elliott talks to you about his novel, and how he couldn't have done it without you. Then, he's at a loss for words for how he feels about you. Suddenly, he kisses you! You begin trembling. You can choose to respond with "I'm happy." or "You're making very uncomfortable. Stop." You two head back to shore, and Elliott comments on how the valley finally looks like home.
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  |details = Elliott writes you a letter saying he has an idea. You join him on the docks. Elliott had fixed the row boat that's been on the docks, and he wonders if you want to go with him on a "maiden voyage".
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* If you accept, Elliott talks about his novel and how he couldn't have done it without you. Then he's at a loss for words to explain how he feels about you. Suddenly, he kisses you! You begin trembling. You can choose to respond with "I'm happy" or "You're making very uncomfortable. Stop" (neither choice affects friendship). You both head back to shore, and Elliott comments on how the valley finally looks like home.
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* If you refuse, Elliott says "I see" and the event ends.
    
[[File:Elliot Ten Heart Event 1.jpg|500px]]
 
[[File:Elliot Ten Heart Event 1.jpg|500px]]
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