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{{quote|I've been setting aside a few scraps for Dusty. He deserves a treat now and then.}}
 
{{quote|I've been setting aside a few scraps for Dusty. He deserves a treat now and then.}}
 
{{quote|If you need some quiet time to yourself, that's okay with me.}}
 
{{quote|If you need some quiet time to yourself, that's okay with me.}}
{{quote|I had a good day. I like to see my grandparents often, they're getting oretty old.}}
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{{quote|I had a good day. I like to see my grandparents often, they're getting pretty old.}}
 
{{quote|I never had many friends in town... I sometimes wonder how I'd end up if you never moved here.}}
 
{{quote|I never had many friends in town... I sometimes wonder how I'd end up if you never moved here.}}
 
{{quote|Winter's just around the corner. We need to double check the heating system, turn off the valves, and check all the insulation in the house...Don't worry, I'll take care of it all.}}
 
{{quote|Winter's just around the corner. We need to double check the heating system, turn off the valves, and check all the insulation in the house...Don't worry, I'll take care of it all.}}
{{quote|There's a couple things around the house that I'm going to try and fix today. Don;t worry about me, I'm not bored.}}
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{{quote|There's a couple things around the house that I'm going to try and fix today. Don't worry about me, I'm not bored.}}
{{quote|I hope my grandparents are doing okay. Granpda's too cheap to turn on the furnance until the last minute.}}
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{{quote|I hope my grandparents are doing okay. Grandpa's too cheap to turn on the furnace until the last minute.}}
 
Standing outside on the porch
 
Standing outside on the porch
{{quote|Hey. Maybe it's the golden light, but you look beautiful today}}
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{{quote|Hey. Maybe it's the golden light, but you look beautiful today.}}
 
{{quote|I like to spend as much time outside as possible. It just feels better to be out here.}}
 
{{quote|I like to spend as much time outside as possible. It just feels better to be out here.}}
 
{{quote|Ahh...It feels great to be outside. Stardew Valley really is the most beautiful place...}}
 
{{quote|Ahh...It feels great to be outside. Stardew Valley really is the most beautiful place...}}
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{{quote|Two beautiful children...We've come a long way, haven't we?}}
 
{{quote|Two beautiful children...We've come a long way, haven't we?}}
 
{{quote|We have to make sure and give <1st child's name> a lot of attention now that we have <2nd child's name>. We don't want any jealousy between them.}}
 
{{quote|We have to make sure and give <1st child's name> a lot of attention now that we have <2nd child's name>. We don't want any jealousy between them.}}
{{quote|This is a great place to raise children. I would've love growing up in a place like this. So much room to run around!}}
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{{quote|This is a great place to raise children. I would've loved growing up in a place like this. So much room to run around!}}
    
==Portraits==
 
==Portraits==
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