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==Relationships==
 
==Relationships==
Emily lives with her sister [[Haley]], and together they and care for their [[2 Willow Lane|parents home]], who have been traveling the world for the past two years. She works with [[Gus]], who employs her part time at [[The Saloon|the saloon]]. She is also friends with [[Sandy]], which they both make mention of. [[Sandy]] is aware of the player's presence even before they have access to [[Calico Desert]], because during her first meeting with the player, she claims that they must be the new farmer Emily wrote to her about.
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Emily lives with her sister [[Haley]], and together they and care for their [[2 Willow Lane|parents home]], who have been traveling the world for the past two years. She works with [[Gus]], who employs her part time at [[The Saloon|the saloon]]. She is also friends with [[Sandy]], whom they both mention. [[Sandy]], at her first meeting with the player, claims to have been aware of the farmer's presence even before access to [[Calico Desert]] was opened, saying that she had written to Emily about the newcomer.
    
In a quest, Clint asks to deliver an amethyst to Emily on his behalf.
 
In a quest, Clint asks to deliver an amethyst to Emily on his behalf.
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