User contributions
30 January 2017
Cheese Cauliflower
omitted word
m+3
Cheese Cauliflower
farmhouse "stages" confusing: stage 2 = upgrade 1, and there are now 3 upgrades (stage 4)
-19
Skills
Unaffected Tools: plural subject, plural verb form
m-1
Skills
Proficiency: add tool to energy use list, per the proficiency reference above; hoe said to work same as most others
+9
Ancient Fruit
highlight the repeating harvest a little more
+72
Green Bean
Give information about proper planting.
+284
Crops
File:Green Bean.png Green Bean: clarify what proper planting is, what you need to do about it and why
+61
28 January 2017
26 January 2017
Quests
List of Story Quests: Provide a description of what you must do to earn the reward for the Archeology story quest
+29
Quests
List of Story Quests: the reward for Advancement story quest is 100g, not 110g
23 January 2017
22 January 2017
21 January 2017
Penny
Neutral: Blackberry is a foraging item, not a crop
+3
Foraging
Expand info on quality levels
+340
Crops
Basics: Add a paragraph on crop quality. Btw, what is the distribution of quality for unfertilized crops? That would be good to have here.
+844
Crops
Ancient Fruit is also a multi-seasonal crop
+20
Coffee Bean
create bullet points for clarity (was that removed earlier?)
m+13
20 January 2017
19 January 2017
18 January 2017
Sweet Gem Berry
better wording: there are always three entities to be clear about - the seed, the plant, and the produce
+8
Sweet Gem Berry
Divide talking about the berry from talking about the seed, using 2 paragraphs. Clearer.
+56
Sweet Gem Berry
Both berry and seed are purchasable from the cart; make the distinction clear.
+12
Sweet Gem Berry
clearer
m+6
Sweet Gem Berry
reword for clarity
+12
Pine Tree
word was omitted
m+3
Survival Burger
Since there are now 3 upgrades, the old text makes it sound as if the first upgrade would not be enough.
-12
17 January 2017
Spring Onion
change my last edit: sorry, I misread a "1" (silver quality) for a "7", getting the count too high by 6
Spring Onion
I found 10 on day 2, still got the TV report on day 4, and on day 4 went and found 30 more! Day 4 was even a "bad luck" day!
-16
15 January 2017
13 January 2017
Equipment
better word
m-1
Equipment
Provide the article with an intro
+440
Tools
portability distinguishes tools from equipment
+118
Chest
grammar
m-1
Pans
Usage: more of the same
+10
Pans
Usage: better repetitious than confusing
+6
Crafting
Bombs: extraneous word
m-3
Tools
Other Tools: sort items in table
Tools
Other Tools: add tool from list at end of article but missing from table
+166
10 January 2017
9 January 2017
Fruit Trees
reword sentence for clarity
+22
Trees
Common Trees: Retained in the rewrite, I delete it now to highlight the deletion. Mathematically irreconcilable with other data, it is also nebulous in meaning.
-82
Trees
Rewrite the article for clarity and reorganize the tree classifications a little
+130
3 January 2017
Ancient Fruit
Undo revision 40618 by Butterbur (talk) self-revert: It's a crop (though it's a wild seed), so it's self-evident the Seed Maker works on it.
-77
Ancient Fruit
add info from the Crop page
+77